This reminds me a bit of anime, and a bit of Laurel K Hamilton, and some Kim Harrison too. This is an auspicious beginning. I would like to see more, also I hope the protagonist is a guy, just because it’s usually a chick hero in the novels I read that are all occult like this.

Yeah, it’s actually sorta based on me, and I’m a guy, so…yeah…hehe

nice job! keep it coming lol.

very descriptive.

i like it!
and we need to talk about that ;)

but yeah pretty good.. just more transition.. like it was kinda randomly put in there about what happens at your house

wow. odd. but very cool……..mysterious somewhat!

hmmmmmmmm interesting