Comments on Shoes by the door by Ezzie

pianoman

insightful
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:35:25.
J.C. Shaley

i like it. i think ur best at short stories.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:35:26.
J.C. Shaley

i like it. i think ur best at short stories.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:35:26.
J.C. Shaley

i like it. i think ur best at short stories.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:35:26.
J.C. Shaley

i like it. i think ur best at short stories.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:35:26.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

nice job! I like this metaphor, and how you pay attention to small details!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:35:26.
THX 0477

I liked this as a thoughtful launching point, so I did a sequel of how this might play into a larger situation, sort of why someone would have this train of thought about shoes.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:35:26.
Punkin

love it. makes less picking about the pile of shoes i have by my door.
5 stars
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:35:26.
OrangeOreos

Wow. This is great! I love simple things like these that you never think about until someone notices it for you…
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:35:26.
Pat G.

wow! great job! i love how you pick up minute details and elaborate to a great extent. your stories truely make people look more deeply into the seemingly simple things in life,
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:35:27.