One time, One Chance may hate them but i love them. hmm…to each his own i guess :)

I kinda agree with you. I mean, i can always feel some sort of electricity when those clouds are overhead.

thnk you

Nice counterpoint, kind of playfully put across.

i love the line “Mock clouds? Please! They are my clouds.”
this is a cool little contradictory (SP?) ficlet!
thnks so much for the sequel!
(and btw, i sequeled you=])