Ooh, great twist to it. Very disorientingly well done on that count. Certainly presents a lot of possibilities going forward.

awesome! it was her shadow’s view! and the boss has found her! she’s in trouble!

Uh-oh. This does not bode well.
I like the structure of this. You quickly got the character up a tree. You’re certainly throwing some big rocks at her. I can’t wait to see what goes down after this…