This flows… I love how your words gel together so well, but I think that you are capable of a much more memorable opening sentence. You have such a varied and vibrant background to draw from, and you seem so intelligent. Why not HIT US OVERTHEHEAD with your astonishing creativity and smarts in sentence one? By the way, I only rate 5’s. This IS one! Good work, Khepa!
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