wow! paid of his murderer right there! I don’t think that’s an image she will forget!

You certainly rose to this challenge! Not only was it an intriguing story, but your descriptions were fantastic from the dank, flooded alley to the cigarette lighter briefly flashing on his practiced cruelty. Top-notch!

I agree with the above, the powerful descriptions work well with the setting and the story. Great read, thanks.

Very good job. 5 stars.