Drama! what happened? This is a great portrayal of your imagination running wild! poor David!

wu-oh… Not good. Exciting!

ya.. great suspense ..

The boys were quiet now, straining their eyes to see into the darkness, to get a glimpse anything.

Are we missing an “Of” in there or a semi-colon, next to “glimpse”?

D’oh! they’re trapped like rats in that cruiser! I sure hope a gun wielding maniac doesn’t appear!