alot is happening here and I like the setup. It made me think of a scientist mixing together specific amounts of each emotion and having an unsuccessful outcome. Very unique format here. Well done! Wonderful insight into your charcters feelings.

Not a bad depiction of a guys thoughts.

oops, he told her at the wrong time, I guess. I bet she was creeped out, I mean he was a lot older right?

Ooh, great situation full of social problems, a plague, forbidden (and slightly creepy, giving us something to struggle with) romance. Nicely done. Has a very ‘sweeping epic’ sort of feel to it.