Whoa! that was rated PG-13…. It was vaguely innocent, yet extremely scary.

Nicely reflective, thoughtful; and scattershot thoughts, definitely the way my brain worked at 17 (hell, who am I kidding, it works that way NOW )!

My favorite part? “that big dopey smile on his lips. I love that smile.” Very girly to critique something, then say that’s what you like best. I do that with my husband all the time. grin

Nice opposite gender writing. The friends were a little harsh to me, but I knew girls that blunt, so it’s not unrealistic.