Whoa, that was amazing. The last line shocked me. He ran into the fire because it was beautiful? Besides that, I love this line. Destruction is beautiful. Nothing is beautiful that cannot be destroyed. Very well written :]

Thank you, that’s actually a quote from a wonderful writer named Corri who goes to my school. I wanted to convey that same feeling that struck me when she read that aloud.

wow. the way you describe this scene i can almost feel the heat. 5 stars

Ya.. very very good..
Elsha and I are writing a series about a psycho arsonist .. this was really cool and inspiring.
Good work.