wow! this poem really had some great descriptions. i like it, even though it seems sad. 5 stars

Woah. This is great. I looked at the tags, and reading it over again… It fits perfectly.

Well that went rather dark. Having a bad day? Well done in any case. Has a very easily visualizable feel to it, which I realize makes very little sense. In other words, reading it, I had clear, distinct, and flowing imagery in my head.

Yeah I guess yesterday had a pretty morbid theme, which may have inspired such a dark idea.