X) Nicely done!Thanks for entering!(And you made it stick out by prequeling… an attempt to angle, perhaps???)
MP was all about the absurd and unexpected. Thus, in that spirit, I did a prequel instead of a sequel. Ta-da!
Nice use of dialogue, well done.
Wow! That was great! Very much Monty Python, indeed.
Is THX slipping? I saw not one, but two typos in this piece. First is should be gait and not gate if I’m correct, and it should be “The bouzouki player” and not “played”.
Corrections made, thanks to Pyro. That’s what I get for trying to ficlet quickly at work.
g2 (la pianista irlandesa)
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Wyatt Aapr
OrangeOreos
PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)
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