That was really good. Haha, the thing they made was only one inch?!
Btw, I love all of your comparsions and such. This one the most though. like windup toys turned loose in a cardboard box and the Mosquito ringtone one too.
Awesome job :]

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Beautiful similies, and I loved the twist at the end!

nice job! guessed from the apple timer that this was going to be a lighthearted piece! Aww! did they have to squash it? I mean it would make a great freak exhibit at the flea circus..

Neat twist, though it does rob from the scare factor a bit.

I stuck with the big rule: “make scary go wrong.” ;) It was tough because I love scary so much, but it was fun!

Speaking of fun, here’s Zombies Ate Her Brain by The Creepshow.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yu3Rfc9fr-0

hahahaha, that ending is priceless. I didn’t see that coming at all. Great idea to make the monster tiny—like it was all just for practice and research before the scientists created the ‘real’ monster. And then the scientist fly swatted it without a second of deliberation lol, that was really funny. What a short and tragic life that poor little monster had, lol.

ha,ha funny creature,quick end to it. Like the last scene of the Fly..

Your comparisons were fantastic, I really enjoyed reading this.

hahaha very cleaver. There goes Vincent Price. (Remember him?)