Ah-ha, so he’s getting suspicious, is he? I gotta get back to this… (I gotta finish a reading marathon… whoopie)
Very well done! I like the POV change, too. It gives us a peek inside Henry’s head.

(oh, one little thing: she said that her advisor name was Lazlo… I’d suggest changing Henry’s addressing her as Lily.)

Whoops! Nice catch, g2. I’ll fix it.

I just realized her name reminds me of the Cartoon Network show Camp Lazlo…

oh geez… I just couldn’t think of another 2-syllable “L” name! Now I’m thinking of that show! grr…

Haha, that show was so like stupid funny! Reading on…

Nice series so far guys :) I much preferred Courage the Cowardly Dog over Camp Lazlo :P