I noticed the strange tense shift and I am going to rewrite that tomorrow. Its 11 and I have to wake up early.

Sorry!

Sorry about this, i had an update to rewrite the tense shift, but ficlets wont let me post the update. This is as much of the ficlet as I am allowed to post, so my apologies. I’ll try again some other time.

:( I want the ending….

It finally worked.

That’s quite an ending. It goes well with the rest. Good job.