Whoa, that was amazing and scary at the same time. I love your tone of writing and how you described the scene. I also like the fact that it reads sort of like a poem [hopefully you were trying to do that] Either way, awesome job on this. Chilling but so, so great :]

Geez, I agree with Freedom all the way. Your writing is so perfectly fitting to the material. This is great, one hundred and two percent!

Cool story. Typically in similar stories like the wolf man, werewolves are indifferent killers. I like that the jaguar man has a brain when he’s beastly and he’s in full control of his power so he can use it for ‘good’ (funny that bloody murder can be good, but I guess it can in this case). There’s a great flow to this story. It’s a joy to read something so well written. Excellent work.

Has he ever considered participating in an eating contest? He had to be wicked fast to eat a full grown man in the time she went into the gas station :)
But in all seriousness, this was really awesome. I love it when there’s a villain-killing-villain type situation in a story. Not that he’s a villain, he seems good so far. But you know what I mean.

omg, compleltly amazing! I shall give it 5 stars but I unfortuently don’t know how because whenever I try it never works for me. :(. But this was awesome all the while.

omg, compleltly amazing! I shall give it 5 stars but I unfortuently don’t know how because whenever I try it never works for me. :(. But this was awesome all the while.

omg, compleltly amazing! I shall give it 5 stars but I unfortuently don’t know how because whenever I try it never works for me. :(. But this was awesome all the while.

I like the segmentation of thoughts here – the way you use line breaks to show individual thoughts and observations; making it a bit disjointed – I think it fits the story well.

That was awesome! I love that the Jaguar Man defends the woman, but at the same time seems to be potentially villainous.

Absolutely awesome. The chilling, foreboding mood is great.
LoA

It has the simple cadence of a legend or fairy tale, but it’s still very original and arresting. Great writing.

Amazingly Horrific! this is a perfect sample of ficlets i like to read.*

Bloody Awesome! You just made my night much better.

Beautifully written, top ficlet material.

Really great writing. I like how he is ominous and yet discerning enough to choose his prey. Wish I could give you a rating!

that’s like, awesome amazing :)