6th line from the bottom, I think you mean “waste”. All in all a pretty good sequel.

NO!! not safe.. this could end badly..
i feel stupid haha i didn’t even read the entire thing.. but this is very good, I don’t want to go back right now. I might later..

thanks for the help blossom, sometimes I get so caught up in writing them that I don’t even think to skim through it for typos =)