Comments on Floetry's Fly Like A Bird Intro along with my answer by Mr Reeses

penguincaptain18

Wow great ficlet. I just really like how it flows which kinda mirrors the picture so that’s really cool. Great job.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:38:57.
Ms Pixy Stik

yes i agree…it flows nice. And i love when it’s relatable to other people..and this is!! COOL BEANS !!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:38:57.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

some spelling and grammatical errors in there, using us and we when you were saying I, and comfortability? I think you mean comfort, and what is overstanding?
Over all, this was creative and great use of the picture, as well as a nice poetic stream of consciousness. :)
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:38:57.
Mr Reeses

No they arent any grammatical nor spelling errors, that how I wanted it… the first paragraph was a song called “Fly Like A Bird” by Floetry. The second paragraph was my response
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:38:58.