haha, this is so good! I love it—the way you wrote it in that running monologue is wicked cool, and very real. This could easily be non fiction, but dont ask don’t tell, lol. Really impressive writing style. Thanks for the read.

This is cute. There’s a name for this kind of writing….

Stream of consciousness writing. I think that’s what it’s called. Anyway, I like it a lot.

great I love it!

that’s not what goes through MY head… but I’m unique! and it is a good stream of consciousness.

How easily it would be to turn those thoughts around and put them in the boys mind. ‘Should I, can I, will she bolt, will she let me….’ Good writing.

Wow sis didn’t know you thought that way. Lol to true though, To true! :D