the mask thing has a scooby-doo feel, is this a dream? the bloody hand is kind of too staged, on the banister? come on! and three and three, I’m laughing. Wasn’t there a challenge to do a funny horror thing?
lol Kerm, very matter of fact way to go about finding some heads. Ha ha, your presence on the page is there, you have a strong writing voice. Perfect ending for a sequel.
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