WOW ! This is kind of the exact reason i love giving challenges(even though this is only my second one). I never would have thought of something like this! Very evocative , beautiful descriptions, and there is something of a fire zeitgeist here on Ficlets lately. A really wonderful piece.

ya.. wow is right .. really well done.. i’m kinda speechless.

it’s evocative, and freaky at the same time. The body? The melting shoes? This guy’s nuts! and yet experiencing, fully, something beautiful, and painful….

Whoa buddy, a little scary, but really really good. I love his cynical joy of the smell of the world ending. Nice descriptions and very imaginative story idea!

whoa i wouldn’t have expected something like this from a challenge like that.

weird, in the best way possible!