I don’t think it’s good….

I don’t think it’s good….

It’s good, but you should probably use a different word than ‘dude.’
It’ll make it more readable.
At least in my opinion. Other than that, I like it.
This one could use a sequel easily :)

I think it was good too! Your hopes should be higher, Racer :]

I echo everyone else. It is good, it has nice potential

You’ve definitely got something here- keep up the good work!
LoA