Comments on Tries To Get Help by Wyatt Aapr

Blusparrow

cool sequel. Ya, definitly needs to be hospitalized.
LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:41:24.
THX 0477

Lovely job at tantalizing us with the possibility of the doctor understanding or at least grasping the possibility of something sinister, and then dashing that hope with the last line.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:41:24.
Freedom

Great sequel. Agree with THX 0477 . Must be sequeled. This story shouldn’t go to waste. I can see a series.
FIVE STARS
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:41:24.
g2 (la pianista irlandesa)

I agree with THX , too. I don’t know if I like this Jameson very much.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:41:24.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

great continuation! I think you’ve captured the situation wonderfully!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:41:24.
wytherwings

wow awesome, I love where you’ve taken the story
hmmmm you know, I think I will sequel
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:41:24.
flute faerie

Agree as well. Nice sequel. This’ll be a great series!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:41:24.