Until the third paragraph it’s a little confusing on whom is doing what to who. But good after that.

Hmmm I agree about the confusing part but then again I’m a blonde and get confused all the time lol. Sounds like a good series starter though.

lol @flute faerie.

Awesome job on this. Thought it was funny when she was struggled to ask him for a one-night stand :]

sounds like trouble to me…. I had to read it a couple of times, but I got it.
This is why I don’t go to bars. lol!

Haha. Very amusing.
LoA

Does matter “canceling out” antimatter end up like nothing happened?
Or pasta and antipasto, for that matter?
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