beautiful! and story of my life! haha.

hmm, easy to follow
and i’m pretty sure everyone will have flashbacks while reading this..
i know did.. hah

I did that’s for sure. Haha :] Great job.

lol, I did too. I like the style of the poem, and the repeated line for emphasis.

awesome poem! I like how the repeated lines help develop the action and emotion. :)

Been there…lots of times. I love that it could have been anything that the narrator got caught doing. Everything from nicking a cookie from the jar on top of the fridge to sneaking a girl into his room in the middle of the night…neither of which I’ve done.
Okay, I’ve swiped a cookie or two.