eww! she’s all bloody and her friend is dead and the mouth moved! I’m grossed out!

AWESOME !!!

Spooky, tension was palpable.. descriptive in a eerie creepy way.

Great details in this. I got chills reading it!

creepy. good descriptions

Creepy origin here. I wonder if the main character escapes or not. Ultimately, creepy.

Creepy was what i was going for: so yay me.. and thanks guys for the comments.