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awesome short poetry!

odd. different. love it!

I agree with above. I wonder what you DID or DIDN ’T do. Awesome job though :]

Wow!
You completely captured the feeling of denial! You got the frantic feeling down visually with the bold and italics and ellipses. I love it. Absolutely LOVE .
You are amazing.
LoA

(to freedom) to know what “I” did or didnt do isnt the point of the poem. It is to show a state of denial. You will never know! But hey let your maginations run wild!

I agree, denial is the prevelent theme.. guilt, hurting someone loved.. powerful.

Perfect denial. I think it could be denial in hurting someone that loves you, or turning them down, or saying one of the worst possible things to them. That’s what it seems like to me.

I definatly… know this feeling. I really like this, great job depicting denial. and I agree with Ezzie, I think it shows a little bit of guilt too.
great job =]