Nicely done! [I wondered what was taking so long… ;-)]

(hee… I just noticed you said “two twins”… nothing wrong with it, but it’s something our family says sometimes, and it’s kinda funny b/c twins implies there are two…)

I like the character’s defiant attitude despite the predicament.

I agree with Thx, the character you have for Henry has an enrapturing perspective on things

I never noticed what a funny phrase two twins is before…

I agree with the above. Reading on…