Ooh, great twist there and not what I was expecting. I loved the line about the stairwell smelling like cigarettes and old people. Effective use of the first person as narration and also adding a bit of characterization of the protagonist.

Welcome back! and great beginning! are you going to continue? :)

awesome dialogue (for which i’m a huge sucker) – and i love the shocking last bit..

i even sequeled THX ’s sequel.

Nice twist! The character of the protagonist is very cool in his own normal way. Does that make sense…?

Love all the sequels, great work guys!

Originally, I was thinking the main character (Jake??) was a newlywed who had a sexual slip-up at a work Christmas party or something….?