awesome! I like the details you put in, the cell, the car in the garage, and the last line is the best!

I agree with Elsha! That’s about the exact opposite of mine.

great details – loved the description of her reflection … and a new alternative ending where the girl decides life is bigger than the situation. Excellent.

I like your decision to describe things more fully. the alternate ending is da bomb :p

nice one. i like this ending especially since it’s a bit pointless writing about something if you’re dead.