Yes, I am prolife. Yes, this is prolife. I know some people might not agree with it, but I normally use poetry to express my beliefs/feelings.

Also, this is inspired by the last line of Pianoman’s poem, Inspiration of a Writer.
http://ficlets.com/stories/43829

Aww, I like it! The only thing is, I was confused by switching from I to You in the middle of the poem, or from baby to parent’s POV . And having carried two, I know those physical feelings, the kicking, the clawing, the rolling, :)

what do you mean, “bad poetry”? I could never write something this good! Especially from a prompt, too!
This is absolutely excellent, just stunning. (I also was a bit confuzzled by the changing POV , but that certainly didn’t take away from the excellence of the poem)

Whoops. I guess to clarify, it’s the baby speaking the entire time. You refers to the parent.

There. Maybe that helped a little. I changed the stretch/pinch part to first person action.

thanks for choosing my poem!!

No problem. I love your poetry!

I like the message you’re portraying here, OO. This is a really cute poem and I like it