Whoa, brutal. I like how you set it vague, just a bad day with a nice song to cheer her, saving the punch for the end. Made for a good climax/cliffhanger.

I do not recognize that song, for sure. Oh the other hand I don’t recognize any of the songs. ;-)

I don’t know this song either. Ya, big punch at the end. I hope everything is alright.
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I meant to say that this song is called Irene, and is by Toby Mac. One of my favorites!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rdlkQYyY37k

Here’s the music video!

Wow, I like how the beginning is just kind of something we can all relate to… and then there’s the shock at the end. Great job, and thanks for entering!
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