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Comments on Favors [[Jake's POV]] by BrokenAngel

Wyatt Aapr

A little confusion at POV at first.
Then little error at: All I could think ‘way’ should it be was.?
Nice continuation. Good job.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:45:16.
SaveTheUnicorns

i’d have some questions too if i were him. how come he gave in to her modeling so quickely?
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:45:16.
SaveTheUnicorns

i’d have some questions too if i were him. how come he gave in to her modeling so quickely?
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:45:16.