Comments on 20 months later [20 Minutes Later Writing Prompt] by brian w

g2 (la pianista irlandesa)

Wow. That’s intense. Just… wow…
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:45:23.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

hmm, the fort that did Jim in. The moral of the story: Do your Homework, kids, or you’ll unwisely climb unstable constructions by the neighbor boy.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:45:24.
Wyatt Aapr

I’m confused. How could he miss Jim if he’s talking to him?
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:45:24.
brian w

@Wyatt – Thanks for always providing one nugget of criticism (I mean in the good way) with most of your posts. Much appreciated.

Just for fun, I tried to strip out as much “extra” information as I could, and may have gotten a bit too much; Jim is dead, and since one of the instructions was to be the other gender, as first person, I am “she”; although I could just have easily been a guy in this story.

She is talking to her memory of him.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:45:24.