Comments on Dangerous Diversion by Blossom Ruoquen

Blossom Ruoquen

What will happen to this nameless boy now?? hint hint! This nameless boy in this unfinished story? nudge nudge!! Whose fate no one has deigned to give him?? wink wink!!!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:45:26.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

LOL ! nice hinting, sometimes we need it…
he should have obeyed the sign.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:45:26.
Wyatt Aapr

Well, right away I could tell it wasn’t a Harley, if the engine purred. Nice Job.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:45:27.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

I sequelled twice.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:45:27.
THX 0477

Some really great lines in this one.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:45:27.
Brebelles

this is great. lol
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:45:27.
OrangeOreos

Those are some awesome descriptions, and a real powerful use of vocabulary. Nice job. I liked the cherry on burnt toast simile!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:45:27.
Lillie Pearl

Ouch! That cherry on burnt toast simile is painful to think about. Great job!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:45:27.
Storykeeper of Fae

I second Lillie Pearl’s comment about the cherry on burnt toast. Made my eyes pop out. There were a couple of little mistakes – two “more”s in the first sentence, “vanes” is “veins”, but otherwise…highly enjoyable.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:45:27.