love the title! that’ll catch some eyes!
and you’ve added some details to the parents, and your fuzzy grasp of reality was hilarious! then you threw us a curve ball at the end, surgery!

alright finally sequeled!

alright finally sequeled!

Ouch. This is getting serious! And I agree about the new details of the parents.

This was good…I guess I gotta go read the others..lol

The description was incredible. You are an artist. I like the line about her eyes turning to tears themselves. And awesome way to incorporate emotion (and alliteration! (: ) in the description of the father.