great sequel! you kept the feel and theme and structure, just wow!

nice angle…you really captured human emotion while keeping the brief, clear cut format.
good job!

Some moths are really fuzzy and I wish I could snuggle with them…

lol sorry. ADD . About your poem: Although it was brief and clear, it didn’t feel cut off or jerky. It read very nicely and I think you accurately captured this aspect of humans :)

Ooh, another turn to the tale. I like the idea of us as moths, makes one think of a sad lives carried out under the mistaken impression that everyone else is a magnificent butterfly.

Very fitting metaphor. People often have a hard time accepting themselves for the amazing people they are.