i really like this. it really has a deep, strong meaning that reaches below the surface. great job, i really like it!

I love this piece, darling! My favorite part is, “You understand. Bad ending.”

You have a knack for keeping the reader engaged and capturing moments that we all can relate to, on one level or another.

Teach me how to write like you! Pretty pretty please!!

I really like this because instead of having a wimpy ending it has a really empowering yeah-you-dont-have-to-take-that-sister ending. Good job! : )