great potential fr a series here…
very well written

wow! this is powerful! it works well as a stand-alone ficlet too!

Whoa! Amazinig job on this. I see series potential too. Then again, I agree with Elsha too. Either way, awesome job :]

Whoa! Amazing job on this. I see series potential too. Then again, I agree with Elsha too. Either way, awesome job :]

wow intense….maybe i’ll write a sequel if i can think of something to match up..