Comments on The other side by kells

kells

Written from Lisa’s point of view, since we have been getting Donald’s for some time. =)

Thanks everyone, for all the delightful comments so far!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:48:35.
kells

Written from Lisa’s point of view, since we have been getting Donald’s for some time. =)

Thanks everyone, for all the delightful comments so far!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:48:35.
TreeBeard

Wow! This is so cool. Perfect continuation of the story. What an utter role reversal from the beginning of the series.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:48:35.
thebetweenspace

I love the last line! Brilliant continuation .
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:48:35.
Tad Winslow

Kells! You’ve been really rolling out the ficlets lately, well done all around. You gave her a laid back, sophisticated, less jittery vibe compared to Donny. Well written as usual! i.e the teasing half grin that flickered on her face. She strikes me as reluctant but willing to get to know Donny one way or another.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:48:35.
kells

thebetweenspace: thanks so much! I’m glad you enjoy it!

Tad: Yeah, at first I imagined her as being the shy one, but I rather like how this change has gone. She’s still somewhat nervous as well, but not as mousy as I first imagined. More self-confident!

thanks everyone, this really means a lot to me, all this love is going to my head! :P
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:48:35.