Great scenario and hilarious action, but I’m not sure why you suddenly switched to the first person for that last bit.

actually it’s supposed to be 1st person the whole way through… I added 3rd in the middle.. i have to fix that..

Thanks for pointing that out!!!!

ha ha! Wendy is so right about Charlie, the manipulative little flirt! Now where to go with this????

I actually just had a really good idea for this…

Wait, how old is she again? And she’s never been too picky about how she made her money? This girl has clearly had the psycho-ho fats track in her home town! Cripes on a cracker, she’s scary!