http://tinyurl.com/5jnypc – But I had to give him friend too…no enjoys smoking a cigar alone…

Very cool perscpective form the Ghosts.. that they are spooked by the humans is a differnt take on a ghost storie.. it was riviting and original. enjoyable read.

Whoa, cool twist! Kudos for making this almost 100% dialogue. Very nicely written.

They scare the hell out of me. Now that’s just priceless! Ghosts scared of humans! I love your dialogue, and all the little added quirks to being a ghost!

Awesome. I love the feel of this and how it paints these ghosts as chill and only anxious when those darn warm bloods interfere. Though, my favorite part is when poor Kevin takes the hit for their smokin’ behavior.

awesome twist on the ghost story! I agree with tbs and orange!