The atmosphere is nicely created, with the use of futuristic terminology adding authenticity without overwhelming the reader with detail. I also like the dialogue: short and explanatory without being overly expository. The story itself is polished too – no excessive verbiage, and phrases well-chosen to support the mood.
The atmosphere is nicely created, with the use of futuristic terminology adding authenticity without overwhelming the reader with detail.
I also like the dialogue: short and explanatory without being overly expository.
The story itself is polished too – no excessive verbiage, and phrases well-chosen to support the mood.
I like it. I stumbled over a word or two, but this isn’t one of my usual genres, so I tend to expect that in these situations. I’d give it a solid 4, verging on 5 stars, were that possible. _
I like it. I stumbled over a word or two, but this isn’t one of my usual genres, so I tend to expect that in these situations.
I’d give it a solid 4, verging on 5 stars, were that possible. _
Want. More. Please!I’ll rate it 5/5 as soon as the ratings are working again. o_O
Melancthe
CrescentDreams
Textual_Phoenix