Woah, that was intense. Ahhmazing job at the descriptions and I love how you did the ending. Splash. So, so sad but great job.

Woah, that was intense. Ahhmazing job at the descriptions and I love how you did the ending. Splash. So, so sad but great job.

IF i was a jerk I would sequel this with a story about how she manages to survive, turns over a new leaf, and lives life to its fullest.

By the way, I’m sure this has been done before (in real life and in story) but you did a great job on it.

this made me sad.

i hope it’s not a true story.

i’m kinda glad it doesn’t have a prequel or a sequel, it leaves mystery and suspense.