This is really cool… I like the idea of the scene being observed. “Why did you pick this quantum state? Not that I’m complaining, mind you, it’s quite beautiful.” “Is another reason required?â? This is just a great line here.
I’d never realised that Valence would make such a great name. Huh. Lovely use of dialogue and description to create the setting, BTW . I’m particularly fond of the way you provide enough detail to make it seem suitably alien without going over into excessive exposition.
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Ezzie
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