wow, now THAT ’S a comeback! I love the monologue, very clever. I was clueless what the twist was going to be… great writing!
That was definitely cool! I completely did not expect that for an ending. Nice job! 5/5
That was awesome! I love the twist at the end. It made me go back and start over with a whole new appreciation.
Great scenes being acted out here. You have a fine tuned ear for good dialogue and it shows in your writing. Dark and deep, perfect for October.
oops, ha ha.
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