One comeback I think we can all wait quite a while for. Nicely done setting it up for that last line. You have a few run-on sentences, but otherwise strong writing.
Seriously… I have sen him in concert twice! Once when I was 11 at the Twilight Zone teen dance club in Metairie La. where he played at like 8 pm before his reall gig at Metairie’s Palladium dance club, and once in 1998 when he toured House of Blues. He doesn’t actually suck. My favorite radio station plays it all the time here, and you know sometyhing grabs a hold of me tightly, and I flow like a harpoon daily and nightly…will it ever stop? Yo, I don’t know, but if you turn off the lights, I glow!
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