very well done! The anger was accentuated by the breaking of items when thrown, and the attack on the car was ended in the suffering of the protagonist, but revealed the truth of the affair. It had a unique setting too, the home of a rich couple..

Nice flip to this story, with the angry male cuckold. Destructiveness is at just the right level here.

YOU have succeeded in changing the story (who woulda thunk it??) The twist gave me a nice surprise and I got a little queasy at the ankle-crunching part.. *shivers
I remember that kind of pain really well, no Wonder he kinda went brain dead