X) I know I’d be confused if someone started randomly flipping out. I like how that confusion was captured by everyone else’s reaction.
(One thing: the last sentence, to me, is a bit unclear. Maybe because I’m not familiar with the story’s prequels, and it’s early, but I didn’t really quite get it.)

I think it meant no one could hear what prompted her to yell “no i won’t!!”

uh-oh. This could be a problem…
LoA