wow ok. u know i thought this might actually get a chance for this story to have a good plot line, and i was starting to get used to the idea of the whole elf thing. but u rly just ruined the whole thing.

this seriosly has nuthin to do with the story. Like ugh!
ruined the plot line

You has mah babies nao?

ummm.. may i say .. what the hell?
i mean fine, she’s an elf. but … man-elf-dwarf-frog eating zombies? seriously?

LOL ! Someone asked for a twist, and you sure gave it!
I think those that don’t like it should go back and write their own sequel. I don’t know why other people don’t do that, other than lack of inspiration.

While I agree that this doesn’t really go with the original story, I must also say that this is freakin HILARIOUS !!! Michael Phelps is a zombie trainer, lmao!!!!!!!!! Completely random but histerical.
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Like Fyora said, if you don’t like it, write ur own!

hahaha yeah it doesnt go with the original story, but this is so funny!!! hahaha michael phelps, the zombie trainer! amazing.